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Now here you are
You're a bright shining star
You light up the world and our lives
With such beauty

Don't be afraid
Of the plans that you've made
There's always a way through the night
Just don't lose your shine.

It's okay to cry
And it's okay to scream
The music that you make
Helps us dream

Follow your heart
Don't believe what they say
You'll find all the answers I'm sure
In your own way

Love is so strong
Your heart can do no wrong
But if you should make a mistake
Don't you lose your shine

If in the night
You could lend me your light
We'll follow the roads of our lives
With each other

As you grow old
And your stories are told
Don't ever forget who you are
And don't lose your shine
:icongreen-tourmaline:

Author's Comments

This was still in my head after all these years. It suddenly floated to the surface again. There’s gotta be a reason for that, so I decided to post it. The first verse remains in the hidden depths so I made up something else, but it seems similar. This is a song I wrote six years ago for my brother on his 30th birthday. I couldn’t afford to buy him anything at that time, so I played the piano and sang to him. :O He actually cried. Try getting that reaction from your brother with something from a mall. :aww:

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A very uplifting poem! wonderful job!

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If there's anything we ahere to, it isn't morals. It's Wrath, Pride, Gluttony, Envy, Lust, Laziness, and my favorite, Greed.
:icongreen-tourmaline:
Aw, thank you! :blushes: I appreciate that. =]

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"Will you change the world, or will you change yourself?" ~ Water Dragon (Chrono Cross)

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